When it comes to success, different people have different opinions aboutwhat makes it come true. Some people regard hard-working as an essentialquality to success while others believe being clever would lead to success.From my point of view, I think perseverance and hard-working are indispensablefor those who want to make an achievement.

談到成功時，對于實現成功的原因不同的人有不同的看法。有些人認為勤奮是成功必備的素質，而另一些人則相信聰明人會實現成功。從我的角度來看，我認為毅力和勤奮對于那些想要成功的人是必不可少的。

     Firstly, perseverance let people step closely towards success. Mostpeople want to make a big difference to prove their value. People who set theirgoal and keep moving would make their dream come true. However, there are somepeople who set their goal but they stop at the difficulty would fail in theend. I think the difference between success and failure is perseverance. If wehave perseverance, even if we are not clever, we will make a great difference,but if we not, we are doomed to lose. As we all know, Edison is a greatinventor in the world. However, before he invented the bulb, he kept trying fortens of thousands of times to find a suitable wire. Let us imagine, if he gaveup at the 999th, then how he couldn’t become so successful. So, I stronglybelieve that perseverance produces success.

首先，毅力讓人離成功越來越近。大多數人都想用不同的方式證明自己的價值。設定自己的目標，向著目標走，就可以使夢想成真了。然而，有些人設立了目標，卻在困難面前妥協了將以失敗告終。我認為成功與失敗之間的差別是毅力。如果我們有毅力，即使我們不聰明，我們也會有很大的不同，但是如果我們沒有毅力，我們注定是要失敗的。我們都知道，愛迪生是一位偉大的發明家。但是，在他發明電燈泡前，他試了為數千次去找一個合適的線。讓我們想象一下，如果他在第九百九十九次放棄了，那么他就不可能變得如此成功。因此，我強烈認為，堅持就會成功。

 Secondly, there is also a kind of people whoare born with cleverness, I think they are lucky. Nevertheless, if they don’tmake a hard work on their way to their goal, they, absolutely, will becomeloser. Whether we are gifted for intelligent, we must be hard-working so as tosuccess. I regard hard-working as an efficient approach to be successfulbecause I believe ‘pains and gains’. As for those who do not make great effortson work, failure follows.  In old times,there is a clever boy who can make excellent poem when he can talk. When hisfather found the little child’s cleverness, he just let the child make poems toshow around while never let the boy learned anything. When the boy grew up,people forgot him because he lost the ability to compose poems and becameordinary as others. From this matter, we can see that only by hard-working canwe get knowledge and make a good future.

其次，還有一種人是天生聰明的，他們是幸運的。然而，如果他們沒有在實現目標之前努力工作，他們當然也會成為失敗者。無論我們是否有天資，我們都應該努力工作以獲得成功。我認為勤奮是成功的一個有效的方法，因為我相信的“付出和收獲”。對于那些不努力工作的人最后是失敗的了。在古代，有一個聰明的男孩，在他能說話的時候就可以作優秀的詩歌。當他的父親發現他孩子的聰明時，他只是讓孩子到處作詩歌來炫耀，卻從不讓他兒子學習別的知識。孩子長大后，人們把他遺忘了，因為他失去了創作能力，成為了普通人。從這件事中，我們可以看到，只有通過努力工作才能獲得知識，擁有一個好的未來。

    Anyway, I think perseverance and hard-working are both important in ourway to success for they enhance us and produce success.

不管怎么樣，我覺得毅力和勤奮在成功路上都是很重要的，因為他們提升我們并獲得成功。